self referential boredom is dangerous
self referential boredom is dangerous. Definitely was longer then it needed to be. I love the relationship between the three and D, but your characters are your STARS, so we should be seeing them out on their adventures! This one almost felt like a documentary...except I didn't learn anything.
An exercise that might help would be Speed Editing. Give yourself a day away from your work, then go back, take a redbull,and cut AS MUCH AS YOU CAN without losing key story elements. It may sound harsh, but anyone can come up with a convoluted storyline. It takes a real [D]irector to cut out all but what the audience needs.
Without this, you run the risk of actually losing viewers and fans, and I know Maloc wouldn't like that!